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Updated!! Please proof read again for me

Jillian, on February 9, 2020 at 10:24 Posted in Plan a wedding 0 5
I appreciate the feedback and suggestions I got! Please proof read 1 more timeSmiley smile
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Latest activity by Jillian, on February 10, 2020 at 16:28
  • Jillian
    Frequent user September 2022 Ontario
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    The everything is all set to centered and yes the details card is cut a bit off. Just need to adjust my cricut
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  • Ashley
    VIP August 2020 Ontario
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    I dont see any spelling errors. just some aesthetics which you dont have to do at all but the little things page..... it looks like the writing isnt all aligned. like "shuttle" looks very close to the edge of the paper whereas "a block" maybe this could be the picture you sent maybe its a little off?

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  • Tori
    Top October 2019 Manitoba
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    I agree with Amelia about the addition of the comma after bees and after skip - but again, personal choice.

    Other than that I also have my opinion on "dinner" seeing as how I grew up with dinner meaning lunch and what most people consider today as dinner is my supper. But hey, that's just what I was taught and I'm not sure if that's just a farm thing, MB thing, or maybe a Ukrainian thing even.

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  • Vinod
    Top August 2017 Ontario
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    I made the invitation about the same given the same amount of information. I will add it to show for an idea and for RSVP and accommodations on 1 card too.Updated!! Please proof read again for me 4

    Phrasing the wedding ceremony card could simplify if it was worded (centered)
    The parents of the bride and groom request your honoured presence at the wesding of
    Reception to follow
    Dress code
    No Boxed Gifts if choosing to monetary.
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  • Amelia
    Master October 2020 New Brunswick
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    I'm a fan of the Oxford comma, so my brain wants "underneath the birds, bees, and trees the ceremony" and "hop, skip, and a jump"

    The Oxford comma is a personal choice so feel free to ignore me!
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