Please proof read for me!!:)

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Yes...Oh ok! Because we wanted to rent shuttle from hotel as well, but the company gave us price what does not make any sense. And wedding is about 5 km from hotel. I guess we'll just have taxi company, who will give us prepayed coupon for each person or group of people, to use to come and to go.

View quoted message It’s free for guests but we are paying for it. Is that what your asking?

How do you manage shuttle for free from hotels to location of wedding?

Accommodations is spelt wrong. also this is super small and you dont have to do this but on the RSVP card i would put a colon after song and not a period and same with the group codes for the hotel block. i would put Group Code: <--- colon. i would also center the little things and accommodations and transportation and ceremony but the last few things are small

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These look lovely!

I might be wrong as this word always trips me up, but I believe that ‘accomodations’ is spelled with two c’s and two m’s. Accommodations!

Everything looks good and read it as a guest receiving the card.

A suggestion of wording the invitation with one word to add between the date and time. Adding at word breaks it up.

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Thank you!! I appreciate it

The only thing I noticed is the apostrophes in bees and trees. They don't need them!


If you're worried try reading out loud, you'll hear if anything sounds awkward or if there are unanswered questions. And also reading each word from the end of the document to the beginning, you can see any typos in individual words that way.

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Thanks thats what we were going for! The lighting is horrible, but they are linen cardstock and we will use a dusty rose envelope to add a touch of colour!

I was going to say "honour" is missing the "u" on the RSVP - but someone caught it already! The invites look awesome though, very simple and elegant!

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Ahh good catch thank you so much! I have re-read them over and over and other people have too and haven't noticed the honours/honor one!

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Thanks I appreciate the feedback and suggestion!! According to my template, the lines match up when I move the words, but I do see what you mean to, ill play around more, i think because the T and A have little ticks extended it makes it look more aligned if that makes sense.

-Honour is spelled 'Honour' on the invitation and 'Honor' on the RSVP card. Would change the RSVP Card to spell it 'Honour' (typical Canadian spelling)

-On the details page I would change 'Bee's and Tree's' to 'Bees and Trees' (Plural instead of possessive....like you've spelled birds)

Not sure if my eyes are playing tricks on me.. but is Ceremony lined up with beneath on your accommodations card?

Bees and trees also don't need apostrophes.

Aside from that, I love your invites! Whatever cursive font you have looks amazing.